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Imagine trying to sell someone a car, then immediately asking to see their driver's license and saying that the car is fast and has black tires, but not mentioning the make and model... 🤦‍♀️

❌ Please, don't do this:

Toby · 1:38 PM

Hello! I am looking for people with a skill set similar to yours. Would you like to hear more?

Jim · 1:39 PM

Hey, Toby. Sure, could you please provide me with some more details about the opportunity?

Toby · 1:41 PM

Sure. The company is pretty big, eco-friendly, and a great place to work at. The job is also really cool. Could you please send me an updated resume of yours, as well as fill out this short 5-minute survey?

Jim · 2:10 PM
I am afraid that these were not really the information I was looking for... also, I have filled out the survey. It wouldn't call it short, though. 😞

Notice how that interaction could've went much smoother, had Toby went straight to the point?

While I do understand you probably have to contact a lot of people just to find that one right candidate, starting out with more information could help you connect with the right person much sooner!

Please don't take this the wrong way, but asking me to:

  • ❌ send you an updated resume
  • ❌ fill out a survey about my skills and industry knowledge
  • ❌ look at a web developer role despite me being a data engineer
  • ❌ have 5 years of experience with tech that's been out for 2 years
  • ❌ stay online while not telling me anything useful (sic!)

without telling me anything specific is not really the most efficient approach.

Let's get straight to the point! 🎯

✅ Try this instead:

Holly · 1:38 PM

Hello! I am looking for people with a skill set similar to yours. Here's the company website, and here's the role description. Would you like to talk about it?

Jim · 1:43 PM

Hey, Holly. Sure, this looks good. We can continue here, or would you rather have a call? I am free after 3 PM.

Holly · 1:44 PM

Sounds great! Expect a call sometime after 3 PM. Also, could you please send me an updated resume of yours?

Jim · 1:45 PM
Sure, I attached my resume. Talk to you soon! 😀

We went from complete strangers to a phone call, and it only took us 5 minutes! What's even cooler, is that both you and I have all the information we need.

You were incredibly helpful and have provided me with:

  • 🌐 company name and website
  • 🔧 responsibilities for the role
  • 📄 contract type, location and possibility of remote work
  • 💰 renumeration and benefits
  • 💻 tech stack

You might have even went the extra mile and told me something about the company's mission statement and their culture and values.

I can't wait to hear what the next step in the process might be! You got me excited! 👏